ext_243430 ([identity profile] tokei.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hollyrose_hime 2011-06-30 04:22 am (UTC)

I. I loved this fic so much I don't even have the words to express myself.

I love the easy way you wrote it, how well it flows from the meeting to the chip shops to the beach itself. England buying lunch and ice cream for Japan then going on their 'date' (with Japan feeling like he's in a shoujou manga oh my heart XD), followed by just lazing around in the sun. I like how you touch on accents of the nations and England's interaction with his citizens.

But my favorite part has to be the very last bit, where they realize how much they both want their relationship to go back to being as close as they were before, and how a wall was finally broken down. <3

All in all, I really enjoyed reading this. :D

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